Sunday, September 19, 2010

Sneak peek.

Chapter Five-
Had Bella opening up more to Alice and admitting her fears, without telling her that it was her brother she trusted but feared at the same time. The conversation brought Rose, Alice's sister in-law more into the picture as she shared her story with Bella. Telling Bella the hardest lesson was to just trust and go with the unknown. you never know unless you try.


Chapter 6-
This chapter has a small talk between longtime friends Jessie and Bella, cut short with the introduction of Bella's older trusted brother Jasper. a slip causes Bella to wind up hurt and Jasper is found consoling her and attempting to take the blame even though he had no knowledge of the solution that would have prevented it.
Here's and excerpt from the chapter: (evil laugh)

I showered and dressed before grabbing my phone and making it outside without Jasper knowing. He was on the phone with what I guessed to be Peter or even Kristen.
I dialed quickly sitting down on the bench outside.
“Hello?” she said.
“Mrs. Cullen this is Bella I was wondering if your husband was home.”
“Sure, Bella. Hold on.” she said cautiously. The line was quiet.
“Hello, Bella.”
“I was wondering if you could help me.” I asked him for the first time since knowing Alice.
“What do you need?”
“To know if I need stitches.”
“Let me grab my bag and I can come over,” he said.
“Thank you,” I told him.
Hanging up and pocketing the phone Jasper opened the screen door and sat next to me.
“It’s going to be okay,” he said pulling me close.
“I never feels like it will be.” I said.
“Dad said you haven’t had a problem with this since you went on your meds. I’m sorry you forgot last night, I should have made sure you took them.”
“I’m a grown woman, Jas. You couldn’t have know n I was even on them.”



Jasper W. Swan
Age: 30

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